Wow, that's good. The second verse kind of bothers me, though, because I once had friends who had a teacher who would say, "If you're feeling mad, bad, sad, glad, and rad all at once, never, ever try to write a poem about it." Thus, this knowledge has prevented me from enjoying such kind of rhyming. but it seems to work here, I want to make dad, "daddy" though. The 3rd verse brings it right back to brilliant.

tht is a very tru and very sad poem, but its brilliant :D well done

Wow, that's a really good poem!! It flows really great and just it's really good!! I like the "By packets of paracetamol, And the vodka she craved." that's original and different...good job!!!

thats really good...its so simple yet effective!!! i really like it. xx

Aww oh my gosh this was so sad.. :( But you wrote it very well.. I hope this isn't true about you, but if it is, my heart goes out to you. Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot to me. Take care & keep writing!

God bless you! <3

awesome poem! i loved it

WOW, amazingly written...So sad though, but perfect!!! I really love it!!! You have talent, keep writing!! 5 again...

*hugs Sabrina*