Gone

by Incognito   Jan 5, 2005


If I could be
Who you’d wanted me to be
I’d still be here

If I could dream
Without having to face nightmares
I’d still be here

If I could love
And be loved in return
I’d still be here

If I could fly
And still know where to find home
I’d still be here

A tear rolls down my cheek
I say my last goodbyes
I’m sorry I have to go
And hope nobody cries.
Be happy for my freedom
It comes at such a cost
But if I went on living
My life would still be lost.
Yours sincerely
Incognito

Even in death I must not be named.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem, i really like the way you wrote this, it definately puts amessage across to the readers. Thankfully it is not true, take care and thanks for the comments...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    THUMBS UP! all the way hun! this was amazing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    that was a really good poem, i loved it from beginning to end! awesome write, keep it up! x x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    "No Incognito, don't do it!!!!" *paperdoll weeps uncontrollably, restained by a consoling body-guard* "It's not worth it!!!"

    Alright, generally suicide poems make me ill, but I found this one chillingly enjoyable. Nice repetition at the start and I loved the effect of the last line.

    Also currently liking your other poems. Do, keep it up and stay away from pointy objects. (That's what I'm told to do, anyway.) Cheers,

    -paperdoll

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    I'm not gonna sit down and write a poem about why, as well as being very cliched its whiny and stupid. Everyone has their reasons. And I'm not gonna commit suicide anyways, it' just a stupid poem.

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