Empty

by [Neon/] ©   Jan 5, 2005


This is not an actual poem.. its just a small, teeny thing i put together... so yeah..

When your words seem empty,
And everythings going wrong,
You'd kill to feel alive,
Though you have been all along.

You die in your dreams,
Gasping for breath,
You see only one ending,
Your sweet and tempting death.

END

don't know what made me want to write this.. i guess its how I've been feeling lately.

COMMENTS ARE MUCH APPRECIATED!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    Despite the fact that you say it's not a poem I thought it was great!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    Sounds like a poem to me. Anyway, it's really good. I hope you're not really thinking about killing yourself or anything! Don't ever give up because there are always people who care about you! (me included!) Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Very interesting. Been feeling crummy lately? I'm here for ya! BTW Good poem!

    ~Ciao Lipton

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