Wow!! That was really great. I can really relate to it.
Jessica

Hehehe, very sweet and kinda cute especially the last parts :D (sorry if its not meant to be cute) Wonderful writing I have to say :D great flow and rhyme all the way ;) keep it up, take care girl ;D

I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

hey gurl...real great poem aye...keep up da good writing...;)....luv aldiyana

Gosh... I felt like you were asking me those rhetorical questions lol, they really draw the audience in. Moreover, the sincerity in ur poem captivates my utter attention. Superb job!!!

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amazing poem, well done.

Wow, this is amazing! Great job!

Casey

wow omg i can really relate to that poem right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! absolutely brillaint work! i loved it soooooooooooo much its abso fab lol very good and well written omg lol its the best lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >>5/5<< (it deserves higher)
bec xXx

lovely poem....real good work....keep it up!!!