Perfect one

by heather   Jan 9, 2005


You always said you wanted someone perfect,you always wanted someone who would care,then you see him he's standing right in front of you he's standing right over their.
he knows your feelings, he knows your heart, he even knows you truly are smart.
you keep hearing this voice thats telling you your in love, its almost like this voice is sent to you From up above.
it tells you he has feelings that he's trying to hide, and that all he needs is you as his guide.
so take a chance take a dive, you need him and he needs you for you both to survive.
you finally got the sense to see how he felt,and when he tells you his love for you, your heart just melts.
you tell your friends you love him, and how he puts stars in your sky, and that for this boy you would die.
so you met your perfect match, you finally fell in love,and that the voice you herd was from up above.

thanks for reading it, and tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    great

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Ohh,you are so Right ! we all wait that Perfect one ! i waited mine,i saw em,But its just that i can't tell him or admit that i love em ! its too sad
    But i don't know what to do . I do really need him,and i know he does too
    but we both are having that Admitting Problem !!!

    Touching subject,Ful of wisdom and
    truth,i really like it.

    5/5

    Much Respect.
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    good poem....i have a ?, how do u get so many comments???
    lol...i want a perfect one
    luv ya

  • 19 years ago

    by Josh Sowiecki

    this is a very well writtin poem, i like reading love poems because they're from the heart. thank you for commenting on my work, keep checking it out, there's more to come

  • 19 years ago

    by lzeeker57

    Sweet! your really good keep writtin u could probably make it far! love you