Almost

by loosing grip   Jan 9, 2005


When your breath is too weak to blow out the candle,
and the dripping of your blood does instead.
You know that you are almost free,
You know that you are almost dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    I really liked it, but I'd have to agree with a few of the other people. That's more of a quote. But its a good one. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by PuRpLeHaYz

    dat was straight up. i liked it 5/5
    can u comment & vote on my poem y do boys lie
    thankz
    xx hayz xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gunjan

    wow!
    ive read ur work..
    and this puts u into my favs!
    uve got serious talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I agree with it being mroe of a quote though it was probably too long to post as once hence the reason its a poem I enjoyed this piece loosing grip, I found it chilling and haunting yet subtle...great work FIVE :o)
    Thanks for your kind comment also
    Eirisa

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    It is more like a quote. But it is very good.
    Check me out
    ~~(~~Morana~~)~~

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