School

by Sinister Soire   Jan 9, 2005


These essays and tests
Are they all for real?
Or is their purpose
To watch me squeal?

I writhe lying on the floor
With the stress overwhelming
And homework piling
Just end it all please I’m advocating

Your tests are way too hard
They’re just making me look bad
You only pass them over me
And that’s what’s really sad

It’s more than just the test
It’s the psychotic mind attacks
Of making me feel bad
And taking up my tracks

Is it your purpose to disrupt me
And my quest of knowledge
You’re making this the hardest
To say I'll get to college

But you know you cannot promise
Or even make it sure
The only thing is positive
My ambitions are all true

I’ll make it into college
With you helping me or not
My task is clear and open
Against your evil plot

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    always true and always great poems logan...keep up the good work !!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    These essays and test

    Just a thought, but I feel that the first line would read better if it said 'These essays and tests.

    Good Poem Though.

    Nici.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    ohh, sorry i misread your comment i though it said that that was the only one that rhymed, and for that i couldn't think of a rhyme for sure that would fit what i wanted so i went with true. if you have something that would work feel free to suggest it

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you for your comments, everyone, sarah l costello, I fixed what you saw, and sorry, but if you didn't notice the whole poem only the 2nd and 4th stanzas rhymed.. thanks again

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Lol You really put it all together well. Awesome in all it's awesomeness.

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