Boys are pretend

by heather   Jan 9, 2005


When you think of what they have said,one million thoughts are running through you head.
you wonder what happened you wonder if its true,but when you think of the pain you get down and blue.
they tell you that they saw him,they tell you its no lie,but when it comes down to it you just cant say goodbye.
you call him up one night he tells you that he's sick,then you see him with some other chick.
you think of the problem,you think of what to do,then you realize he ain't your boo.
you decide to say goodbye,you decide to let him go,but when you tell him all he says is so.
you think of what your friends said,you think of how they were right,you wondered how you doubted them, you all use to be so tight.
you wonder if their happy you wonder if their sad,you call them up seeing if their mad.
they tell you know hard feelings they tell you its alright,then right away you guys are through with that fight.
when you sit back and think you know this will happen again,cause mostly all boys are pretend!!!

thanks for taiking the time to read my poem,if you have the time will you please vote end leave a coment. thanks love:heather

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey heather........thanx a lot for commenting about my poem.....
    this is truly a wonderful poem.and i like your last line...MOSTLY all boys are pretend...thats is true...cos not all are...
    one suggestion tho....u could try breaking up each line into two....i mean after the commas....it would make it much easier to read.....so just space it out k?
    love yas mvah GOD SPEED;)!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun this is awesome, I loved it, I can definetly relate to this and I do agree boys are definetly pretend sometimes, this is awesome, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Hey
    I love your poem..you know how to write what you feel
    Good job

    If you get some time do you think you could read my poem "I Miss you" it would mean alot..its not very good but i want to know what you think

  • 19 years ago

    by robynscott90

    very good and very true

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    good poem....just dont doubt all guyz cuz of one stupid ass
    luv ya