by ? Jan 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I see the tears that fall tonight, |
by justin
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That hit deeper than expected. So many people think I have no emotions and feel nothing when in reality I just cover it up. I feel more than most people but I've had to keep it covered up. |
by Ehsi
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Man, Your Writing shit is the best, I loved it 5/5 I LOVED the nursery rhyme. Great Stuff. |
by Kel*bel
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omg you are such an amoazing writer...this has touched me deeply...the ending is very good i hope this isnt true it is so sad..well keep up the good work.. i love all your poems there great!! c ya |
by Carmen
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OMG, that's so sad! you are now probably my favorite author on this site. please continue writing, i love reading stuff from you! keep it up! 5/5 |
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nice poem, like the use of other rhymes to reiterate yours |