Psychotic Heart

by Psychotic Heart   Jan 10, 2005


My heart screams in broken pain.As all I've ever seen was your intoxicated face glancing at me in pure disgust.

I sit here deserted,smashed to lifless fragments.My soul is black with unimaginable loss.

Always thinking,never ouloud,never sharing the feelings that I hide,like a devastating secret kept from all.

I feel every tear like drops of rain.All Ive ever had was a life full of empty scens and broken dreams.

I lie here screaming intentionally hoping you'll start to care,even just to see a glimpse of your cracked emotion;love.I'm crying just to keep you here.I'm lost in heavy dispair.

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  • 19 years ago

    by strawberrykiwi

    hey : )..thx for ur comment..i chekked ur poem out..definately enjoyed it n can relate for sure..good work..keep it up :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Watch your grammar and spacing. Try to insert a space after the periods so that it looks more neat and orderly, and this line "black with unimaginable lose." doesn't quite make sense, did u mean "black with unimaginable loss."?
    Anyway, you defineitly have promise as a writer, as you mentioned that this was your first poem. Keep writing you have the talent, and like anything, practice in writing makes you better. Stick to writing, it's a great realese and this poem was good, nice job!

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