I saw it in your eyes

by MAYBE TOMORROW   Jan 10, 2005


I hope when you reach for her hand
you remember how we were
recall the way you kissed my lips
and held my hand instead of hers

i hope when you gaze into her eyes
all you see is my reflection
and when you feel like you lost it all
she serves you no protection

i hope when you whisper in her ear
my voice will begin to haunt
and when you view my picture
you see the girl you want

i hope when you lay your head down
our past you will retrace
and come to find you dont love her
and she can never take my place

i hope feel the way i do
when you saw him walk me to class
your eyes met mine for only a second
and you knew you were part of the past

id love to hear what you think so leave a comment or email me :) everyone could use some improvement!

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  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    haha thanks i enjoyed writing this one also haha and no problem emails rock hehe
    take care chick

    love
    trina

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    lol hey cristha its ok i just noticed i make a spelling error in the comment above u also haha thanks for the posstive feedback it wont go unnoticed :)

    youre rad!

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    ooh im sorry to hear about that i hope you find someone grrreat :) tkae care and thank you very much

    ur rad!

  • 19 years ago

    by the crazy insanist

    i feel like this now, since i wuz dumped yesterday, great job, hope to read more of your poems!!!