Wash away

by Sinister Soire   Jan 12, 2005


I feel I need to remind you
More and more each day
For my love is always growing
With you it is I stay

Ill gladly give up all my sleep
To make sure you’re alright
And if I could you know I would
Kick that as$ holes as$ tonight

I love you beyond words
And I know that you love me
You hate him more than anything
He’s worse than Satan could ever be

The things he did to you,
Still haunt you in your dreams
Much like you invade my mind
For love is bursting at my seams

I love you though you keep things back
And you lie for my own sake
It will all be ok tonight
But that truth I cannot make

The real truth is I’m so helpless
Watching you in pain
My only wish is to be there
So your fears may be slain

My call to you is oh so sweet
But you only hear the sour
When the time comes for us to meet
My love will be your shower

I’ll wash away your sorrows
I’ll wash away your tears
I’ll wash away the pain you hide
I’ll be with you for all years

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That poem was the best. It's so great I'm speechless.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    Wow logan, that poem is just amazing !!!! I just love your writing !!! she is lucky !!! keep up the amazing work, luv
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you alot, the girl is amazing and deserves every ounce of love i have to give. i love her sooo much

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I really like this poem. It is really touching and kind of makes me jealous that someone can have someone like you to love them as much as you obviously do.
    'I love you though you keep things back
    And you lie for my own sake
    It will all be ok tonight
    But that truth I cannot make'
    That is my favourite verse, especially the first line. Alot of people find it hard to love someone who holds things back, at least that's what I've come to know from past experiences.
    Anyway, Lovely poem. Great rhythm.
    Well done, Take care.
    -Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    That was so sweet! I found this line a little awkward though:
    "From love I’m bursting at my seams"

    How bout:
    "For love is bursting at my seams"
    "Love is bursting at my seams"

    Other than that, this was an extreamly heartwarming peice of writing. I loved it a lot. definatly a 5/5. keep it up!
    -Cheerfully Cynical

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