" ♥Mysterious Success♥ "

by ChildofGod87   Jan 12, 2005


*!*This poem is quite interesting I just felt like writing something :D... But I hope everyone would like this poem!!!*!*

You have the courage to stand so strong
Thinking to yourself that now everything
Is going to be okay, for now!
Even if things are okay I just was curious
What do you want to accomplish??

I see a successful person as yourself
With athletic background
And I'm thinking your a "Goodie To Shoes"
But then if I see something in your eyes
It's probably just because you have something
That shows within your eyes!!!
I gotta admit that everyone has something
Special in they're eyes that just shine even!!!

What if I looked into your eyes real quick
You probably wouldn't notice that I looked
By me being clever I think I could trick you
But who knows ... right?
Maybe you would be looking at me first!!!
Trying to read my eyes..
You'd probably find something interesting!
Who knows...

® Copyright © Sedusha 2005

~!~Plz comment/rate...It'll mean a lot to me:)~!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    This is truly beautiful. I relate with this poem so much.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great poem, the eyes can tell it all. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    nice poem...sorry for not commenting on your works for a while...got busy with my studies...neway,take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Eyes hold a lot but rarely people take the time to see...liked this poem a lil better than the rest for some odd reason...i guess its the difference in it!! well God Bless Ya...

    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    Sedusha i thought it was a kick ass poem...it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it like all ur other poems=)

    By Da Way
    Thx a lot for da "wake up call"..LoLz..u and Heather really helped me..thx again and for ur comments as well=D

    *XoX much love,Sw33ti3*