Winning the race

by kiri   Jan 13, 2005


Even when the sun hides behind a cloud I'm around and i am proud my many fears get washed away wen i am with u night and day whenever i see your face i have to smile i know your flattered but your in denial please hold me tight and don't let go cause i am your's i hope u know my fears cum back wen I'm not with u wen your with sum1 else sum1 new i cry sometimes wen theres no reason wen your warmth isn't near I'm am freezing i worry and worry till i think I'm dying but i stay alive i am really trying the next time i see your face i know I'm wining i have won the race
i rote that poem about my youngest sister and youngest brother who i don't see very often cause my dad wont let me please comment it would mean heaps to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by A Walking Disaster

    Thank you for the comment,
    This poem was very good.
    You are a really good writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Nice job.. thats my email cool_gurlcy_15@hotmail.com .. u can write better but i liked it anywayz

  • 18 years ago

    by rick

    Nicely done but like youve heard. it has spelling errors in it which makes it kinda hard to follow. other then that its great.

  • 19 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    hey kiri
    i wanted to know that was a great poem. And i'm really sorry you don't get to see your family. I didn't even know I had a sister till two years ago and now we're never apart. But i've never meet my other sister, my dad won't let me either. Don't loose hope and thanks so much for reading my poem! I'm always here if you want to talk!

    Love Always
    ~*~Natesbaby~*~

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