Would You....

by ShadowedPhoenix   Jan 15, 2005


Would you listen if I broke down and cried?
I know you think so but my feelings are no lie.
I miss you, I really do
And I was hoping that if I missed you, you would miss me to!

Would you understand if I had the words to explain?
Explain all my emotions, fantasies, and all my pain.
I'm scared you really don't care
And it would kill me because that just isn't fair.

Would you forgive me if I asked you to?
I know I hurt you
But i hurt myself to
It just proves that the truth can cut you and make you bruised!

Would you love me if I loved you forever?
I can't remember when last you said did, oh wait you never,
Believe me I really do love you
And I was hoping that if I loved you, you would love me to!!

Would you remember me and place me in your fantasies?
Because It would mean so much,
If you would,
Love me like I wish you did!!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by sophia

    Thanks for the comment it really meant a lot and thanks for correcting me.... love your poems as well

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Wonderful poem. I love the thing on discussion that you read ppls poems. you must be very kind:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I take it met my ex... honestly it is though you sat and witnessed where I was a year ago and reading your piece has brought all those emotions flooding back within my heart and soul. I cannot say when I last wanted to cry after reading a poem, but this piece has stirred my emotions and left me with tears in my eyes. Thank You!

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    very well, you seemed to be able to put what is in your heart onto a peice of paper or allow it to flow through the keyboard; this is a unique talent, your a very well versed person.

    i feel privileged to be able to read your poems.

    Thank you very much for the read and also for your comments on my poems, each one i write i put a lot of effort into, i am glad someone takes notice of it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    It seemed to be off kilter, best way to explain it it didn't flow for me that is. But thats just me. In time as you progress I am sure your work will be wonderful but I think your aways away. Keep it up you will get there

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