Why I hate You

by Valerie   Jan 17, 2005

I hate the sun
I hate the rain
I hate your face
and I hate change

I hate how you treat me
and the way I act
I hate when I turn
to the sight of your back

I hate your friends
and how they are gay
I hate it when
you have nothing to say

I hate the fact
that you don't care
I hate your body
and what you wear

I hate myself
for breaking apart
for letting you see me
open my heart

I hate for the love
that I feel always
It's because of you
I am sad for days

The power you have
is what I hate
the love that you lack
is what hurts so great

I'm tired of hating
and crying sucks too
I'm tired of everything
I'm tired of you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I'm not a big fan of love poems, but i love this one, keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by UM

    Another good one...just out of curiosity, have you tried to write any poems with rhyme schemes other than abcb? Or have you tried to write anything in freeverse?

  • 15 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Hate is such a strong word..but I can relate to everything you hated in this poem. You get a 5 from me. The best words are the ones you can relate too in my book.

  • 15 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this is an interesting poem. you seem to rhyme and sometimes maybe even be joking but then you get serious again. good job tho. 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 15 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    it was a very good poem! very powerful! the only part i wasnt too sure about was:

    I hate your friends
    and how they are gay

    but thats just me lol
    keep up the great work!