is ok. i totally understand where your comming from. Except my old x-boyfriend played me and i found out 2 years after the fact while wer were still best friends. But keep writing, its really interesting to connect with so many different teenagers.

Another really good poem here! I especially liked this bit:
You said that you wouldn’t act dumb;
now you leave & I’m left asking...
....HOW COME?
Its got really good rhymes in it and I just totally loved it!
Take care,
Rachelxx

I really liked it, the rhyming seemed natural, keep writing xxx

wow great poem i love the way it was set out your a talented poet it really shows in your work you have a gift great poem once again i mean it! 5/5
bec xXx

thanks for allt he comments!! they are greatly appreciated!! keep up all your great work!! :) peace and love.

Good job on this one, just try not to use comments so much and stuff... and get a little more rhythm in your lines. That's it, good job!

wonderful poem.

good job i think you made a point