Shooting star

by jescelle   Jan 20, 2005


The wind blows through the window,
the curtains dance to the song of my heart,
as i lay here on the bed,
in an empty room,
i wish to the angels in heaven,
that you will want me too.
just like i long for you,
to pledge your undying love for me,
Ive felt this way ever since you said you wanted me,
but now your with her,
a girl who wants another guy.
if only you'd talk to me today,
i will tell you of my loving soul,
its just the way you looked to the floor the first time you saw me,
as if i was a Goddess,
i need to know that you'll love me,
i need to know that you'll need me.
and as the silent tears roll down my cheeks,
ill look to the sky and pray,
that soon you'll listen and want me too...
i need you.
how long has it been?
the connection between us is like fireworks,
they explode in the air as does my heart,
but it falls every time you say goodbye to me,
your friend...
because you are my shooting star.

i know this isn't very good but i tried to express my feelings for this guy as best as i could

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  • 19 years ago

    by marlee

    its ok....nothn special

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    Jescelle, i love your poems, they're really good! thank u so much for commenting on mine(sorry it took me awhile to get back to you, i've been super busy lately!) keep it up, ur an awesome poet!!

    *Erika*

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    its great jes, not poor at all hun. full of emotion.
    luv ya always hun,
    take care,
    ellie
    xoxoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    isnt very good?? how could you say that! i love it! i know how it is though trying to find words to express how you feel about a guy. but you did a great job!! have a most wonderful and magnificant day because you deserve it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lostraindrops

    i like it