1 Year Ago

by Valerie   Jan 20, 2005


One year ago
on this very day
our eyes had met
and seemed to say.......

"I want to meet you.
You seem sincere
What is your name
Why are you here?"

After some talking
and some flirting too
We knew this was right
me and you

For months and months
the time flew by
our like grew to love
and everything was fine

I loved you
and you loved me
we were both happy
or so it seemed

Those last few weeks
there was some trouble
someone had finally
popped our bubble

We walked on eggshells
you and me
but we were still together
for our love ran deep

I knew you were sad
Now I was too
None of that mattered
because I loved you

I tried to help
but to no avail
I was losing my grip
I was going to fail

And then it happened
this I knew
Instead of one
we were now me and you

Today was one year
but you didn't know
and today you decided
to let me go.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    This is a 5/5 for you. I can so relate to this poem. I just broke up with someone in November..our 1 year would have been Jan 18. It breaks my heart because I still love him, but he no longer loves me. This made me so sad. This piece truly touched my heart, both reading it and personally. Wonderful job.

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    that was so good....sad...but good
    sounds alot like what happened to me not too long ago...it really sux i know.... but your an awsome writer keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Aww sad and sweet poem, liked it *5/5*
    xxx