by Rachelle Jan 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Yea sorry you guys I'm not good at rhyming poems at all I thought I would just bare with me and could you comment and vote please |
by kid
even though you say that you are not good at rhyming i just think that you dont have a wide range of vocabulary therefore you can not think of as many words to rhyme with. i liked the poem though. it was really good. sometimes it doesnt matter weather you can rhyme well or not its the word placement and selection and i think you did just fine. keep rockin the poems |