by nandini
good job dude!!!especially loved the first two lines of the second last stanza.....keep writing!!! |
by Ann Stareyes
Kumar, what talent you have. I'm completely speechless. You write the most beautiful poems that I have ever read. I do want to ask a favor of you, please read My Friends Are My Treasure, when you get a chance. I wrote this one especially to a few of my good friends and also to all my friends on this website. Great job, once again. |
by ChildofGod87
Wonderful poem! I just realized that your sensitive in this poem:) I guess I haven't noticed it before!!! But I loved this poem and others! God Bless You! |
by Jose Herrera
This is a nice lovely poem I really enjoy readomg this poem. It is the way you write that makes a beautiful poem be so perfect..keep it up man.. |
by Autumn
wow, your amazing! I love your peice, you have an amazing talent, no one knows how to hit the spot like you, you say what you feel, and comfort others while you do it, your awesome! Keep up the work! |
by christina
wow great poem i loved every line |
by Gracie Jo
Aww.. this was amazing. I loved the ending! Good job & keep it up! |
by Amit
talented |
by Ele
i love the rythme in this. it works so well |
by Seductive
good job |
by JAY Poet
Great job!!!!!!!!! |
by PURE HEART
Hi kumar |