Life, a battle

by Timothy B   Jan 26, 2005


Make your team
And take them to battle
Build a bridge
And cross the river
Pull your heads together
And take on anything
That might come your way
When you reach the end
Enjoy the rewards
That will be waiting there

For me
This is what life is all about

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Hey Tim,

    Could not have put it better myself! AMAZING... truly amazing power inside that heart of yours! ;)

    Keep the poems flowing... they are awesome! :)

    Take care hun,

    Tess

    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Yeh i like your view....it's inspiring.
    I like that it wa said but really oot across what you had to. Another great poem...:)
    take care..xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by clevername

    I really liked this one it has a good message ur very talented and optimistic it seems never loose that

  • 18 years ago

    by Elissa

    Very well written 5/5
    Love always,
    Elissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    short but it gets the message across. what i like about life is the different ways people view it! cool idea comparing it to a battle, now that i think of it, it makes sence.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

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