Comments : ONE SWEET DAY

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    sweet

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    cute poem!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Short and sweet! Really cute poem :P I give you a five!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    Very nice except I don't understand why you capitalize every word.

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    how sweet!! it deserves to be published on valentine day's cards...keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    it was cute and at the same time simple!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Short but you did a really great job there. It is well written like the others. It shows the emotions very well. Great work!! =) 5/5