i really really liked this poem keep it up, have a look at mine and see if there any gd if u have spare time

really cute. 5/5 keep up ^-^

cool not bad i like it
(you should sheck me out some time

K, im not big on love poems of this type, so im really into it. nothing personal. but i like lines 6,7, and 8. they sound cool and create cool images.

Good job! nice!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE love poems! great job, keep it up! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~5/5

-Bloomed Rose

I love how it dowsnt seem like you sat down and thought for hours of words to make the rhym pattern! beautifuly writen!

Poems like this make me happy :) lots of emotion.. and it's somethin I can really relate to. You're an excellent poet :P

Lovely, it wasnt the best youve written but it was still pretty awesome
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AnnMarie --
Now, THiS, was a terrific poem. =D The flow and rhyming was perfect, which allowed for easier reading. It had a really cute story to it, as well. Great job -- don`t change anything about it!
Thanks much for your comment on my poem ;; I was really looking for feedback on that, and that`s what you gave. =D

Love much,
Samantha Hollywood

Cute. Good job on this. I think this is the first Valentine poem I have read on here and you did a great job. the flow was great. No rocky points in it at all.

>black&&blue

Awww that is really sweet. I love the simple flow of this poem. I have to say that my favourite lines are these

you fill my heart with love and hope,
and wash out the pain like water and soap,

I thought they were really cute.

Awww very cute and very sweet... I'm not sure what else to say.. It had great flow and the poem seemed like it wrote itself.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Outstanding flow and sweet sentiment

the only thing a would do is lose some words in the tenth line

you won't have to sacrifice the meaning

Awwww.. that was soo sweet! i loved it.. it flowed well, the rhymes worked and the descriptions were beautiful! wonderful work! 5/5

Ohhh..sounds like what I do everynight. So afraid I'll lose the one I love. Anyway. Love it.

Awe. 5/5. that is soo cute. i love your use of words. they two 1st lines for me hooked. well done i loved it. these two lines would have to be my fav though..
"you are the only one I dare desire,
you fill my heart with a burning fire,"

your style is great. excellent job.