great poem, I love the last lines.

wow thats an amazing poem i love it, and i can realte alot to this. >5/5<
by the way Happy Birthday!=)
xxxChristinaxxx

Wow. Really emotional! Great stuff! Oh--and thanks for looking at my stuff as well! Every comment helps!

that was a great poem, i can totally relate, great job!!

WOW! this poem is amazing! i can relate also.... Major points for you
Take Care,
paulette

wow!!! you really know how to write, your poems are out of the ordinary. The rhyme is really good in all the poem, except the last paragraph...

a baring of the soul, so to speak. a very nice flow 5

you are a good writer i must say i enjoy ur poems so far they ryhme i like
-Lady Jaz