When you Bring Me Down

by Unloved ♥   Jan 28, 2005


Its one of the reasons out of a million
Its one of the reasons why this depression has just begun
Its one of the reasons why I'm so down

Sometimes you can see me
And other times it feels like you don't even bother to even glance
You seem like your in a trance
But I'm not that dumb to think that way
You just don't care, thats what my mind will always say

You try to help me up
And the last second you let go
Its like love me and suddenly you don't
I want to ask you for help but I know you won't

You bring me down
And tell me I'll never make it
You bring me down
And you tell me to not fake it

Can't you see your one of the reasons why I'm this way
And you tell me not fake it
What else am I suppose to do
Its not like anything ever real

You bring me down
And tell me I'm just a waste of time
You bring me down
And tell me I'm worth less than I dime

You bring me down
And tell me things will get harder
You bring me down
And tell me I'm just a failure

So I close my eyes
Pretend everything's okay
And I open them up
Nothings gone away

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  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    thank u Chirs!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Great one!..Lol..Loved it..So..Well..I dunno how to describe it...Like..It's practically tear dropping goodness!(if that makes sense) haha

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by Liz

    Great poem, long, but definately worth it, keep writing! x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing!! Keep on writing, and take care...i'm sure that everybody can relate to this poem...good job!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy