Dang Eirisa!! This poem was so well written! You are one of a kind and that just blows me away..Every line you write just keeps me wanting to read more! The title you picked was awsome! Keep up the great work!!
~Chelsey~

Thanks girlies! I love you all!

wow this is heaps good!!! i love your work its so deep and creative its great your so talented!!!!! i think im gona hav 2 add u 2 my faves! LOL EXCELLENT POEM! 5/5

Great poem! Really well written, and seems to go a lot deeper than most poems tend to do. Shows a real range of thought. Nice work! If youe have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx.

hey how you doin? well this poem is great your a really good writer! when i have time later i will come back and read more but i have to go right now bye!

~lil slam~

fascinating poem of self knowledge. nice flow

hey, this is hot. i can relate to what your saying. my poem 'in the eyes of the beholder' is also about leading a double life, but i'm being called back to the darker side. although, i think your poem is better than mine. so great job. ;)

jay

love love loved it. Great write. I serioulsy loved it. It was so deep.
It gave me chills. Excellent job.'
5/5
Always,
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cate

Thats an awesome poem. Real deep. I likey. sheesh. i must sound really corny in this comment. Toodles.

This is very true for most people I think. Everyone hides themselves and only tells certain people how they really feel. Good work.

II REALLIE LIK DIS POEMS.. FEELS LIK MAH LIFE.. N HOW PEPO SEE ME WELLS KEEP UP DA GO0D WORK

this is my life... liked this poem... the way u wrote it.... its perfectly perfect... 5/5 it deserve more than that but hey! they can only let me vote once... lol anyways beautiful piece...

hope u pass by mine sometimes... votes and comments much appreciated...
much love
***letishia***

hey, great poem!!! it realy makes u think and it has a nice flow!

hey gurl! i luved ya poem! Your and awesome writer! i'm soo comin back a readin more! LUVZ IT! xoxo

It's a wonderful poem! And you're such a talented writer! What more I can say!! Just love this poem!

Very well written poem...it was very good and kept me interesting
the rhyming was excellent and the flow was brilliant...worth my 5/5

Once again a very good poem, nice work