that is really good though i hope its not true, keep it up xxxxx

Awww thats a really good poem. Its not too long yet not too short - just what I like in a poem. I tend to get bored reading long poems so this was perfect for me! If its true, I am very sorry. I hope your dads ok.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Aw sweet, great poem, It seemed to fit well without sounding like you were trying to hard to ryhme, really liked it xxx

thank u for the comment....i like the poem a lot, you write well but i was curious to perhaps know what is goin on with your father? much love to you *5
Love Heather

great poem! i love it! that's really sweet! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

grl nice work i say the same as every one else, sorry 4 youre dad if it is true. xxxx :p

amazing poem!!

awwe hunnay=( im so sorry

wow, wow! that was soo sad :( im sorry if thats true, wow so emotionally expressed... descriptive and just wow. im speechless! take good care xxx