My first love

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jan 31, 2005


When I first met you I didnt know you
Now I've gotten to know you
I feel like I've known you forever
Everytime I'm around you I feel free
But when we are apart I'm improsened in a cage
No one has the key to get me out but you
Baby you are the fire in my flame
Don't say goodbye
I never understood love
until I met you

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I did like this but I can tell that you are improving as a writer!

    Your flow has gotten better, but I did like the meaning in this it was sweet, I always enjoy your endings :D

    This poem could use some help the word "you" was used a little to close to each other, or you can leave it the way it is to show yourself you have grown as a writer.

    x)

More Poems By Poetic Tragedy08