by .:Breezy:. Feb 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Deep with in my soul |
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Wow..i liked this poem a lot! i liked the structure, the rhyme scheme, the imigery and the colour. But most of all, i loved the sentiment, keep writting... |
by WtrmlnLvr
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Hey....wow....thats really touching! It was really good and i hope that you never have to go back to that little spot and stay because i know its a lonely feeling!! keep up the great work, i love it!! |
by ~ChEeKs~
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i like your poem it was really good |