u could call it something like unexpected or something and yeah its really really good!!!!!
xx

this was...great!! nice job!! keep it up!! :)

hm i think a good name would be 'that girl' or 'that little girl' or 'her' or 'she' whatever the names your choice but as for the poem nice work! its really poetic and creative i really liked it you seem really talented! brilliant poem! 5/5
bec xXx

Just like the crack of a bat.
i didn't like tht description..i mean considering the beautiful descriptions in this poem..this one was a let down..as for a titile u could try somehtin like shadow gurl or visions

omg... this is awesome!!!! brilliant write!! keep up the good work!!
*if u could check out my poems some time i'd be very greatful*
~Hayley~

Wow...I can actually picture the scene...and it's creepy...yeah...you have so much imagination...and it's good.