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wonderful poem! i love the style!

I liked that alot I really did I been in and out of some other work and I have to say by far you have alot to work with good job I don't say that alot. The style is not like mine but you did well it flowed and it gave a clear picture of what you wanted to convey to your readers. Read unexpected Guest and Never-Ending Gift and let me know what you think good job though

loved the structure of the poem!!!!!! very intersting how few words and short length of line can portray such emotion, i really liked it, and can really relate. very cool new stly, i have also written a couple of poems ion a similar odd structure, and i think it helps to convay whatever it is in the poem. groovy.
5/5....very well written.
polly:)
xxxx

i love ther style cos its really different but it also works really well, keep it up xxxx

excellent poem, I like the style. Keep up the good work!
Take care,
Rachelxx