Empty Love
by *~*Soldier Lover*~* Feb 5, 2005
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My heart is empty |
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20 years ago
by *Sherrie*
this is good for what its worth...sherrie...
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20 years ago
by bucky
well it is short ... really short and i am not trying to be rude in this comment but also the line that says
My heart is empty
filled with sadness
doesn't make sense to me since it is empty then filled i dunno sorry but i didn't really like this poem maybe cause it was to short and there just wasn't enough make it good ... it's so small thats it's almost a quote ... i didn't rate cause i would have rated it a 3 and i don't want to ruin your average ... but tell you friend to write longer and most importantly keep writing ... sorry if this comment offends you ... but it's just my own opinon
