Aspect of Life

by MEGAN BUTTERLY   Feb 10, 2005


Time is ticking;Life doesn't last
Have fun while you can, make it a blast
Make as many friends as possible
Avoid the enemies that pass by

Relationships may come and go and make you want to cry

Your family will get you mad and you'll think your going crazy
But when you come to think of it
Your dads the ones that lazy

The theory is to get a job
and to do well in school
The one that sucks the most
is to follow all the rules

Don't drink and drive , or even smoke
It's all extremely bad for you
In the end you may croak

The aspect of life i am telling you is true
But as everyone says teenagers have no clue

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  • 19 years ago

    by Megzzy

    I think you're a great writer but you need to be careful what comments you leave people as to what happened to the person theyre greiving about..

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I liked this one to. Most adults think like that is true but there are a few who have been there and know what its like to be in your shoes

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I liked the poem a lot. It's very true too, and the flow was different from other poems but it was still good. 5/5 and nothing less.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by MEGAN BUTTERLY

    hey whats up its brett i thought the poem was awesome keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mimi112

    NICE !