To the reader...

by Alya   Feb 11, 2005


Reader - the bruder
Don't look for insights,
Silenced utter
Is in my lines,
The pain of the chained
Soul breaking free,
Song of the caged
Hidden in me,
Mindless mind -
An oxymoron!
Unwise and untied
Strolling along.
Reader - the jury
What can you know
Clearly and truly
Of hidden below,
Under the quiet
Peaceful sea
Waiting to riot,
Sleeping in me.
What can you know
Of the solitude,
Reader- the bruder,
Mindless prude!

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  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    very very very good..5/5 i liked it alot..

    much love
    shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    I love that you have written a poem not just to the reader, but about the reader. Very creative and very good, keep going!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i loved it..very orginal! a five!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    A very original piece. Nicely written, and 'deep' for want of a better word. Kudos.

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    I liked this poem, very interesting, neat pattern. Great job, 5!