Jus a poem

by CaptainTyingKnots   Feb 12, 2005


Rest in peace my sweat dear friends
sorry i couldn't mend your wounds
sorry i couldn't save you
even though i gave you all i had
i guess it wasn't good enough

today i stood on your grave
and i couldn't find the words to say
a bird landed on your stone
just as i was about to walk away

it reminded me of you
he was looking for a friend
i wondered if he'd find one
or would his life end like yours?

its done yet....though....
I'll finish it later
plz rate and comment even though its not done yet

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sandra

    I like ur poem.
    Looking forward to read it when its done :-)
    Luv S.

  • 19 years ago

    by Drugs && Hugs

    ... its really good i cant wait to see it when its done.