Hey, that's a great poem, ryly emotional, your a great poet keep up the good work!
Lotsa love
XOXO-Holly

Great poem, really emotional and well written, Thanx for the comments its great to have some feedback, keep writing, stay strong, Take care katie xx

so sad ... i would miss my dad so much if he was gone i don't even want to think about it... sorry to hear but i can see it has helped you become a wonderful poet ... keep up the good work ... well done 5/5

your poems r so full or real thought I like them very much. I ish I had your talent.

thanks guys for all the comments and support..to Brooke, you have lots of talent yourself, your a very great poet..all of you are!! soo keep up all your work!! peace and love♥.

im so sorry about your dad, it was a brillant poem and im sure he'd have been so proud. u have so much talent, keep it up and i look forward to reading more xxx

What a beautiful poem!! Loved the flow!

that was really good.. im sorry about your loss, but im sure whoever this is dedicated to is so proud of you.
stay strong hun.
check out some of my work if you'd like

the poem fills me with emotion

thanks for the comments! i really appreciate it! take care. peace and love♥