Wow, really that was beautiful. I really enjoyed that. I'm sucha sap.

i hope you really feel like this. this was a sweet poem. but it feels like there's something missing....
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

great job, another good poem, hope 2 read more of ur work soon

Another great poem. It was short but well written. Great work!!! =)

I loved this. So very true! I gave u a 5.

lovely poem!! keep it up!! :)

Hey, me and you have the same name. thats cool. good poem by the way. check some of mine out. l8erz. kilman = David B.

aww that is an excellent poem....sounds like love to me...thanks for commenting on mine 5/5

i liked this one too...nice job...5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Very touching, i like this poem but thruthfully, i would of liked to read more, because love is so much more, but what i read was enough to give you a 5/5, great job on it.