am sorry 4 ur loss, ur poem is reli good tho gets feelings across v wel i woz cryin while reading it!
luv han xx

omg, im so sorry about your situation. Thanks for the comments, stay strong and live for today. -5-

Aww I'm sorryabout your loss. This poe was very emotional. Great job writing about such a though subject. Keep your head up high.

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Aww, im so sorry .. altho not the happiest poem it was definately an awesome write .. !

Oh Sweety ! that was so sad : (
so touchy,did u ask ur mam to read this?!!!!

am waiting your answer.

i loved this part soo much :(
Lets keep our head up,
lets be happy too;
Because this is what,
he, would want us to do!

Peace,
Darla

Excellent ! cant say but Excellnet !
n dont forget to answer me : )

Peace

thanks for all your comments.
and to Rua Francis, no, i actually didnt ask my mom to read this..im not sure why though...

Great job... I hope you can move on and live happily, I can't say i know how it feels, but I can say that it's hard... but you can do it, don't let yourself fall.

Awe, I'm really sorry about your dad, nice poem! Keep it up!

wELL HERE I AM COMMENTIN UR POEMS HOPIN YOUL DO DA SAME LOL DATS A SAD BUT GOOD POEM LUV IT OH I GAVE IT A 5

very excellent ... also sad .... but you are wise and you know what to do ... very good poem

Very nice work.

thanks everyone for the comments!! you all have great work and amazing talent!! keep it up!! peace and love♥

another great poem, u have such talent, xxxx

omG how sad.. hope ur doing okay hunzz.. :** keep writting hope 2 hear more.. love always Stepphyg... p.s chek out one of mine if ya getta chance mwAaz

Hey, I must have missed this one. it's a nice one...I like it, keep up the good work your doing great!!
lotsa love
XOXO-Holly

Wow I'm so sorry to hear your loss. That was a nice short and sweet poem though. Loved it and I'm sure he would have. <33 Erin

thanks everyone for the comments!!! i really appreciate them!! you all have wonderfull poems, keep it up!! :) take care.

awww its really good, very touching so0 sad i love it!
thanx for the comment on my poem!
5/5
much love
savannah

Well written touching poem