Our First Valentine 2005

by creasy   Feb 14, 2005


This is our first valentine and I�m happy to spend it with you,
because I know that our love, will remain true.

You make me smile when no one can,
I love it when you hold my hand.

You always treat me with love and care,
and when I need you, youre always there.

You say the right things at the right time,
boy/girl, Im so happy that you are mine.

You give me strength to stand up tall,
and let me know I can accomplish anything at all.

You make me happy when I see your face
and suddenly my heart begins to race.

You are the one that I love,
I think you were sent here from up above.

I love it when I here your name,
you make me hot like burning flame.

What im trying to say is that Im happy that your mine,
I love you sweety and Happy Valentine!!

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~thanks~

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  • 19 years ago

    by R F


    Oh sweeet subject to talk about it ! and i enjoyed the writing it brought up a smile"Coz Love is the Best thing to talk about" : )

    this part was soo cute :

    I love it when I here your name,
    you make me hot like burning flame

    i was like oH lol,so cute

    Keep it up,
    Peace,
    Darla

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this is beautyful sweet! i love it, good job, 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    thanks sierra, i would comment on your poem but you dont have any!! i really appreciate the comments from everyone thanks!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Missy_May

    Great poem girly! keep up the good work! your doin great, can't wait to check out more of ur poems! try and check out soem of my new ones, if you already haven't and thanks for the comments on the ones u did check out!
    lots love-
    XOXO-Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    hey gurl i really enjoyed readin ur poem itz so sweet keep up tha gud work!!!!!

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