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by DestinyAwaits Feb 14, 2005
Love, romance /
No need for a heart shaped card,
With crayon wrote Will you be mine.
A box of arsenic filled chocolates,
Is what I devoured from my valentine.
Ripping my heart right out of my chest,
You survive off of my pure blood.
With your witty and clever smile,
In my mind you flood.
Your untrust worthy words in a single bullet,
You so gently placed in your gun.
Now your shaky finger on the trigger,
You tell me what's done is done.
With the rope you so lovingly knotted,
I hang my tear soaked eyes to dry.
You kicked the chair right out from under me,
Leaving me no time to wonder why.
As a vampire you sucked the life out of me,
Causing my soul to turn cold and dark.
The taste of my blood on your lips,
Your deathly kiss has left your mark.
You have poisoned my every thought,
It's spreading through my angelic veins.
The demon I have become lurks beneath my skin,
No longer fragile I'm immune to the pain.
So to this day of love and passion,
I'll smile and keep you in mind.
Send you a box of chocolate covered razors,
And write.. "Will you be My Bloody Valentine"
by broken angel
I love it because it is so unique and just unusual. I saw that it was under the category "love poem" and I was like what the h e l l ? But it definitely added to the surprise. 5/5 in my book.
Luv always, KT
Creative poem, and Impressive writing, You are a powerful writer.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit
by Heather M Craig
Wow! i absolutely loved this with just a bit of horror and just a bit of creativity, i envy you! lol, Great work!-5
cheers for ya comments,
cheers for ya comments,means alot to know that people really take time nd read the poems.T/C TANXS AGAIN