Sweet things

by Dead As Yesterday   Feb 15, 2005


Another Valentines Day has came and went
Alone with my thoughts was how it was spent
Of all things I had dreamed that I would do
Most of all was to spend it with you

But this was not how things were to be
You found someone else someone not me
You looked so beautiful my heart just died
I struggled with my emotions buried alive

Maybe next Valentines things will change
I’ll tell you I love you and you’ll feel the same
I’ll hold you in my arms you’ll whisper in my ear
And tell me all the sweet things I’m dying to hear

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thank you SO SO much for that comment on Two broken hearts and all of the others, I can't believe someone really likes my work that much...yeah, I'm 16 but I was forced to grow up too damn quick!!~ How old are you, David? Well, I find you a very talented writer, your work is deep and provoking. you only have 15 poems as of now but I'm hoping to see more! i love your work, seriously, you're one of my fave writers on here!!
    God bless
    Much love,
    Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully written..I loved the line:
    "I struggled with my emotions buried alive"
    Great job...keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica

    aww its a really sweet poem...reminds me of how i feel..good work..keep it up <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    good poem... keep up your good work. you are a good poet, this one was nice...

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

    ♥ amit ♥

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