by Shelby G. Feb 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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I'll be away for a while |
by Robyn Park
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Not bad, but not your best. Not really sure what I don't like about it, it just didn't seem to have much emotion behind it. It was well written and all, it just lacked SOMETHING (I don't know what). Anyway, keep writing. |
by Andrea
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great poem! |