This poem is heartbreaking..it really makes you feel. Beautifully written.

almost make me wanna cry and i liked it lots :P keep up the good work

Great poem. That was really something. It was very sad =( You really hit the spot there. Great work!!! =)

That was a really good poem, very emotional and sad. I really like the structure of the poem, but most of the content! Keep writing. xxxx

Wow, this poem deserves the perfet 5 rating that it is getting (and you will get that from me, too). It was wonderfully written, absolutly flawless. Great job!

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this is so sad and very powerful. good job. and if u ever need to talk message me.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Wow.....great job. It makes you feel like you are the person asking "Why can't you see?" 5/5

Ouuuuu! I really love it! I love it love it love it! Keep it up! Arrivederci! I love it! Ye got talent indeed!

wow that is an awesome poem! its so sad and very emotional! it makes you feel like your really there! keep up the great work!

-jenn

Very very touching poem... i gave it a five out of five.... im sorry that its like this for you.. you can alwasy talk to me... i lost my Best friend to cutting... she went to far and killed herself.... i wish to help!

Wow good poem. Keep up the good work. :)

wow i really like this 5/5 for sure. i know how you feel. keep it up
Paula <3
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P.S think you could comment on some of my featured poems.. only if you have the time thought ? <3

nicely written

Aw great poem. Very powerful and very moving. I like it cause I know exactly what you mean. Some people...well they know what Im going through but they choose to ignore it or treat it as a joke. Well enough about me.
Take care,
Rachelxx

this is great!! LOVED it!! keep it up!! :)

Wow, great poem! Truly great. A lot of emotion. I know how you feel... Beautifully written.

Love,
Tiff

I really like this the best. I can relate to this one too.

Much love,
Breezy

This was particularily good because it describes the way people choose not to see/believe the truth, because they don't know how to handle it.
Excellent.

Nice work its just so sad. I read all these sad poems and like them because they are so real. I just wish it wasn't what they really feel.

nice work, it really came together well! sorry if this is really happening!
but neverthe less great job