Instability

by Minkus   Feb 17, 2005


This world is so unstable
Just one tap
could push it over the edge
Careening out of control
And then what happens?
We don’t have a clue
But we don’t want to find out
Though it sometimes seems
That we’ve already fallen
into the gap
And it’s chaos
But this is nothing-
When it goes over,
You’ll see
It’ll all be over
And nothing will be left
You’ll see
Nothing at all
So you won’t see
Because we’ll all be gone
With nothing remaining
But darkness.

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    commenting again. luv your poems. keep it up
    5/5

    check out my poems some time~!!~ please read my poem rose or inner darkness or glommy or being forgotten. thanks
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    luv
    nida

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    great job. keep it up david~!!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Good Job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    hummmm.... i realy like this one your a good writer i like it...lol... keep up that great work!...Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Thanks for the advice. I like the plot to this story. Good job. 5/5. 3>jess

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