well written but damn that's really sad. i hope everything turns out ok... good luck, be strong. xXx

Thank you 4 ur comment this poem was very sad I wish you well. If u need some1 2 talk 2 you can IM me at aztecprincess1200@yahoo.com or bigbubble1401@aol.com.

That was really good JJ. Your a really good writier, keep up the good work! (",)

~Krissy

~Good poem, JJ. Nice and expressive. You are such a great daughter, your dad should be proud of you.
~I am not going anywhere, my computer networking exam is near, so i am studying hard to get good marks, passing percentage is 85%, which is too high :( last time i got 86+9/100+10, so i cleared it, this time i am lost somewhere in her love ;-) hope i'll get good marks. my exam is on 16th march, my b'day! dont forget to wish me ok?
~take care, 5! always believe in love, ~amit

Great poem JJ! This was very touching and Im sure your dad would be very proud! You'll both be in my prayers,,Keep it up!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Thanks to all of you!! I really appriciate all the kind words. But this poem wasn't written about me. I wrote it for a friend. I wish all of you well! take care
-jj-

This is the kind of poem that I like to call the "I'll do anything..." kind. I really like it. Great job!

in regards to your comment, thank you very much!- however, the poem is not in reference to me...it's my best friend that wants to go back...i secretly don't want her to and it hurts ever time she talks about it (which is 24-7) but I just want her to be happy so I cant wait till she goes back in May yet I'm the friend left behind. you see?

As for your poem, it hurts dearly. My parents are together so I can't say that I relate but your pain peels off the page, the words appeal deeply. It truly shows how much you care about your dad and you want everyone to be happy and you'll sacrifice anything. Beautiful sweetheart-5

keep in touch,
Love Heather.

luuved this poem!1 and i hope everything turns out ok with ur friend!! keep up the gd work..once again itz woderful!!
tc byeee

wow thats a great poem, but its really sad.

Great poem! Sorry about it though. I don't know that feeling but I'm sure it hurts. Keep on fighting though and keep up the good work! Take care!
-Conner

heyy this is a great poem. sry bout ur dad tho ... i hope everything worked out tho. xoXox peace out

Awh this poem is so sad. I just hope you really don't feel like it's your fault. much love.