You see me..

by Noelle k.   Feb 19, 2005


You see my body in the water face down, will you come to my rescue or just watch me drowin

you see me fall down will you come and pick me off the ground?

you see me fighting for my life will you help or just look down at the ground?

you see me bleeding, will you laugh and mess around?

you see I'm unhappy so how come you ignore that I'm down?

you see that I'm suffocating, so why do you make me stick around?

please feel free to vote and comment thank you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    good and sad!

    ~lil slam~ thanks for the comment~

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    GREAT METAPHORE! finally someone who uses metaphores. I like how you used the different parts of dieing to show that your depressed.

    That Metaphore was one of the best i have read hun. definately one of your best, you should put it on your featured list, i think it is an awesome poem. I loved every word of it.

    Five/Five wicked poem!

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