A great script for the poem, although it was written a little shabby.. put a few more minutes into this peice and make it perfect.. althought im not hooked, i really do like it..

So..Emotional..Wow..Lol I am speechless..Infinity outta Five..Holy Crap..Haha..God..It's just like The emotion..The Drama..Comes Right out and Smacks you in the face!..

Great one!
Chris

good poem..really makes me think <3 rate and comment some of mine!

Wow, i loved how you placed it like the girl was a ghost watching her father react to her death. Really well done girl. As always :).
xox
-A

thats so sad, really well writen but really sad, and by the way Luffuuls yew <---- kool word!! lol take care bye!!

~lil slam~

i dont get it.......?

Hey, this is really good...makes me think of thingz...keep it up and take care..you did a fantastic job!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Great poem! Keep it up!

Rebecca.

this comment may mean nothing to you but i would like to share.. how i feel and the new outlook on life our poem has given me.i didnt understand it when i first read it but i read it again and again untill i got exactly what i needed to out of it. i really liked it and that may seem like its not saying much but thats only because your poem was worht more words then i could say.keep rockin the poems
-danPHAN

that was strange poem. but i liked it alot... i loved how she tried to confert him, i dont know, that was so sweet. i like your work. nice job.

wow....omg...this poem is so sad and yet the way you have written it is just wonderful...amazing job done!

its amazing how such small things inspire us...as do they me. Great poem , Kalah, i loved the beginning much more than the ending however!-5

God bless U with love,
~*always~*Heather.*~

wow great poem keep it up

amzingli scari! scarili amazing! u go gurl!!!!

d*a*m*n i love it your on my favorists

dude..man i got the chills...omg!! that was written so well..keep it up..if you dont mind check out my stuff..Heather Nicole

damn. thats all i can say. that was awesome. if i could write like that....then...damn. -nancy

it brought me to tears...i wish my mom would just cry for me so i know she does care