hey is really true....hope your future poems would be as true....

Short and so sweet! I love it. Great job and keep it up!

Ps. Where in RI did/does your family live?

Sweet. I need a hug! :)

loved it.So true

Wow ths was so good..
i love it.
keep it up!
;)

you are so right ...a hug goes a long way, your poem was great, i would like to find it on a greeting card....

hug hug (a couple for you)
Doreen 5/5

i love it...wonderful write!

good poem, shorter than most of your poems, but still good.. :)

*yea, i wrote that one about my little brother.. . our dad went to Iraq and I wrote what I saw through him, glad you like it.*

Aww...even though that was a very short poem it was very sweet! 5.0

This poem is great. I really liked the last two lines. Another 5/5. I really liked thid poem because it is true:)

Aww thats so cute!
i love the concept, and the rhyme is good.