i really like it i have the same exact feelings for someone

very good poem =) I voted a 5! keep it up.. please check out my poemes.. thanks

i loved it ..a 5/5

great job, i to know how it feels to have your heart ripped apart and it doesnt feel good at all, ur a very talented writer, keep up the great work!!

i went through a similar thing, it really hurts but u portrayed the feelings really well, it flowed and has a good ryme scheme...... top job! >>5/5<<
bec

aww i like this poem a lot i can get what u mean but i think u say u hate him but u love him cuz dat has happened to me... god job keep writing

I can see your style is improving thats good. but your still along way from making me feel your pain Read I Hate You and see the difference I hope this helps

awww this was soo good it sounds like something that i just recently went through but i don't hate they guy i'm still in the denial part of how and why he left me ya know anyways great poem 5/5

Ttyl
Maddy

It wasn't my favourites out of your peotry but it was still pretty good! Keep writing!

Good poem ^.^
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Ok I think that you got ALL of your feelings out in this one, I wouldn't want to be your enemy =0) great poem, very deep and emotional...

*Hugs Sabrina*

I loved this i hate you is such a powerful sentence and you used it well i loved the repitition this was my favorite poems of yours great job this was excellent 5/5 the last stanza concluded it so well ahh i love this lol great job